There’s a quiet ache running through this, and I felt it. The repetition of “life happens in whispers” gives the poem a heartbeat - soft, persistent, almost like a prayer.I love when poetry dares to hold both sorrow and wonder in the same breath. Thank you for sharing this-there’s a lot to sit with here.
Yes! This is exactly my feeling when thinking about all that - the contrast between sorrow and wonder. Thank you so much, Nazish, for your words and for being such a supportive and quality reader. 🤍
There’s a quiet ache running through this, and I felt it. The repetition of “life happens in whispers” gives the poem a heartbeat - soft, persistent, almost like a prayer.I love when poetry dares to hold both sorrow and wonder in the same breath. Thank you for sharing this-there’s a lot to sit with here.
Yes! This is exactly my feeling when thinking about all that - the contrast between sorrow and wonder. Thank you so much, Nazish, for your words and for being such a supportive and quality reader. 🤍
Oh wow, that is probably my favorite so far! You are so, so talented. I have so many lines I love that I don’t know what to re-stack